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Friday, April 6, 2012

The HAWMC prompt for day 6 is Health haiku. Write a haiku about your health focus. 5 syllables/7 syllables/5 syllables. Write as many as you like.

Chronic pain dances
upon my weary constant
never ending change

Minutes, seconds tick
across endless, distant time
pain forges onward

My mind cannot sift
through battles of  agony
whirling in and out

I am a person
whose body suffers endless
agonizing pain


  1. Breath, breath, stop
    Still here, breathing slowly,
    She lives on in me.

    My Mum slowing dying in hospice care. It won't be long now.

  1. Diane Carlisle said...:

    This is lovely, not the pain you're going through, but the message.

    I hope you don't mind that I picked you for the One Lovely Blog Award. :)

  1. Well done haikus... I've never developed a skill for doing them myself though.

  1. Becky said...:

    I love your haikus! Yours are certainly much more coherent than mine were ;)

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